| Reviews for Climbing High |
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   Laelae chapter 1 . 8/10/2004 Great story! I think you could elaborate more on the fine details. A bit more of an ending might be good too. |
| lengg chapter 1 . 7/28/2004 Nice! I like your plot! It's rather interesting and it can also tell people the advantage and disadvantage of having a diet. |
| Individual-9086 chapter 1 . 7/13/2004 Hmm.. I must be honest, this is a little boring. I can tell you are writing this to get a point across, but people will not read it if it is not entertaining. |
| Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 6/24/2004 Wow that was good I wish I had that much inspiration Keep on writing! |
| jennii chapter 1 . 4/5/2004 cant help voicing my opinion. thought that was boring. dunno.. ignore me, am just bored cos its easter holls and i cant start going out with m8s til tomoro |
| Ella Stone chapter 1 . 3/12/2004 very good on the first chapter! very meaningful moral. please write more! i wanna know how their parents take it n how long they get grounded for xoxo Melanie |
| Last Straw chapter 1 . 1/27/2004 I see the symbolism, great title too. It dosent seam like these girls would be in first grade, but its a good story with a nice lesson. |
| Yelah chapter 1 . 1/12/2004 Oh c'mon. Write more! |
| XxX sTaRzYgIrL XxX chapter 1 . 12/15/2003 No! you would have to stop it just at the good part! Please continue soon! |
| horseriding-muso chapter 1 . 12/8/2003 Wow.. :) Nice story... good moral told in a nice way.. not a lecture.. I like muchly. |
| Cacunai chapter 1 . 9/17/2003 A good lesson for young children, told in an interesting fashion. Very nice job. Rather ironic me reading it, when I rarely eat anything myself! But have no fear, I'm perfectly healthy! Want to read my poem? Please? Hehe, shameful, me asking in a review... |
| Retta chapter 1 . 7/31/2003 That is a sweet story. The conclusion was well done. |