Reviews for Climbing High
Laelae chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
Great story! I think you could elaborate more on the fine details. A bit more of an ending might be good too.
lengg chapter 1 . 7/28/2004
Nice! I like your plot! It's rather interesting and it can also tell people the advantage and disadvantage of having a diet.
Individual-9086 chapter 1 . 7/13/2004
Hmm.. I must be honest, this is a little boring. I can tell you are writing this to get a point across, but people will not read it if it is not entertaining.
Alhana Starbreeze chapter 1 . 6/24/2004
Wow that was good
I wish I had that much inspiration
Keep on writing!
jennii chapter 1 . 4/5/2004
cant help voicing my opinion. thought that was boring. dunno.. ignore me, am just bored cos its easter holls and i cant start going out with m8s til tomoro
Ella Stone chapter 1 . 3/12/2004
very good on the first chapter! very meaningful moral. please write more! i wanna know how their parents take it n how long they get grounded for
xoxo
Melanie
Last Straw chapter 1 . 1/27/2004
I see the symbolism, great title too. It dosent seam like these girls would be in first grade, but its a good story with a nice lesson.
Yelah chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
Oh c'mon. Write more!
XxX sTaRzYgIrL XxX chapter 1 . 12/15/2003
No! you would have to stop it just at the good part! Please continue soon!
horseriding-muso chapter 1 . 12/8/2003
Wow.. :) Nice story... good moral told in a nice way.. not a lecture.. I like muchly.
Cacunai chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
A good lesson for young children, told in an interesting fashion. Very nice job. Rather ironic me reading it, when I rarely eat anything myself! But have no fear, I'm perfectly healthy! Want to read my poem? Please? Hehe, shameful, me asking in a review...
Retta chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
That is a sweet story. The conclusion was well done.