Reviews for One Step Away
As chapter 1 . 1/9/2010
thank you, for putting down so aptly in words what i have felt forever.
aagraba chapter 1 . 1/24/2009
Sadly, much too true. Hope it wasn't the case for you. Last two lines give it a powerful closing, and I especially liked "Where falling is the only thing you know." It's missing something, in the middle-end. I feel like one more line was needed or something to make this circle complete. But overall, good job on expressing this idea
Trishcbury chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
i like your style a lot.

you only need 15 or so lines, and i feel like i know who and what you're talking about.
Frore chapter 1 . 4/11/2006
Hey, not bad at all. Keep up the good work.
Zannna chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Um.

Wow. I can't tell you how many times I've felt like that. That was really good. I wish I could put my feelings into words like that.

Bravo. Zana