Very sweet. I liked how the poem flows from one point of view to the other. Very smooth. Good job.

cool...but who is this little girl?

Very sad and sweet. There is a song called "Streets of Heaven" that deals with an issue similar to that

This was so sad, and I liked how you included the view points of both the father and the daughter. Simple and touching, keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

That was beautiful! Very moving. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing!

Very sad, very touching... but I've already told you that. Can't wait to see more when you're ready to post them!

That's so sweet...

That is so good, Skip. I think I know what it's about but I'm not sure. Fill me in sometime. I really like this one!

Oh, wow. I fighting to keep the knot out of my throat. It's a very sweet poem, even better that there's actually meaning to it and that meaning is able to get across to those who read it. I loved it. Very well written.

~Heidi Miller

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