Reviews for Listen to me
Miranda Crystal-Bearer chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
Very sweet. I liked how the poem flows from one point of view to the other. Very smooth. Good job.
AussieGal chapter 1 . 12/22/2004
cool...but who is this little girl?
Angel of Southern Chicks chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
Very sad and sweet. There is a song called "Streets of Heaven" that deals with an issue similar to that
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
This was so sad, and I liked how you included the view points of both the father and the daughter. Simple and touching, keep writing :)

Laineniel chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
That was beautiful! Very moving. It brought tears to my eyes. Amazing!
The Hitokiri Onigiri chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Very sad, very touching... but I've already told you that. Can't wait to see more when you're ready to post them!
godsgurl23 chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
That's so sweet...
Letters to No One chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
That is so good, Skip. I think I know what it's about but I'm not sure. Fill me in sometime. I really like this one!
Heidi Miller chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Oh, wow. I fighting to keep the knot out of my throat. It's a very sweet poem, even better that there's actually meaning to it and that meaning is able to get across to those who read it. I loved it. Very well written.

~Heidi Miller

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