Reviews for Sour
Mr.ChingY chapter 1 . 1/10/2004
but which of my many is this poem in regards to?
Nick Keller chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
i'll work on the music to go with that lynn
Lynn H chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
that would kinda be funny if her name was Sunshine..but its not..and a cuya is a brother in tagalog, the language of the phillipines...hes like a brother to me,..thanks for the review
Francis Kahoy chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
What's a cuya? And is the girl's name Sunshine?
TomAfton chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Brilliant! I love it! "Why have those butterflies turned into bees?" is perhaps the best line I've ever heard. Well done.