| Reviews for Sour |
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  Mr.ChingY chapter 1 . 1/10/2004 but which of my many is this poem in regards to? |
 Nick Keller chapter 1 . 8/21/2003 i'll work on the music to go with that lynn |
| Lynn H chapter 1 . 7/31/2003 that would kinda be funny if her name was Sunshine..but its not..and a cuya is a brother in tagalog, the language of the phillipines...hes like a brother to me,..thanks for the review |
| Francis Kahoy chapter 1 . 7/31/2003 What's a cuya? And is the girl's name Sunshine? |
| TomAfton chapter 1 . 7/30/2003 Brilliant! I love it! "Why have those butterflies turned into bees?" is perhaps the best line I've ever heard. Well done. |