Reviews for Race of Cowards
Jenza chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
This was a really good poem. I haven't found a lot of poets who use the more modern stile of writing. I'm glad to have found one. The only thing I can offer is, some stronger punctuation in certain places may get the message across even better. But, I don't know it may be your style to write the way you write. But aside from that, this was a magnificent poem.
Toni Adele Coburn chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
This is very good poetry, full of depth and mystery. It could be referring to many different situations and therefore makes it interesting to read. I like the way it talks about pain and anger, it makes me think that what you are saying is true, are we just a race of cowards?
A Phantom Stranger chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Great poem though I dont agree with the view you put forward. One of the main reason humanity has reached this point is because of war and pain. But thats an arguement I wont get into great poem well done
reluctant writer chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
That is the down side of things, but you said it well.
Zara the Pirate chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
My god, that was beautiful, I loved the imagery.