Reviews for Uncertain Destiny
Sanqhian chapter 1 . 7/7/2004
Another possible hit. However, I come to notice a common mistake you make. In sentences like:
"Much.", Liz said.
You don't need the period after 'much'. Replace the period with the comma and you'll be fine. Also, if the sentence ends in an ! or ? you don't need the comma. Just a little help. Please continue this story. It can only get better.
Gabe chapter 1 . 6/22/2004
Hey...good. Dont forget bout me now, aight? Keep writing. Bye
Samara Morgan-Ring chapter 2 . 6/15/2004
1-800-find-my-muse yes, I believe I have spotted your muse at da beach ((Huntington!)), you might want to hurry and catch her SO YOU CAN UPDATE THE STORY THAT ROX ASS AND KILL OFF ZANDERS!
EvarWing chapter 2 . 2/21/2004
Gr ya I hate it when you start a really good story, and you've got the plot and all, and then you just loose it. lol I totally understand, I have about three or four stories I haven't updated in so long, hehe. Anyway, I hope you get past the writer's block thing, and get the passion to start writing it again, it's sounding really interesting.
icytigerwarrior chapter 1 . 1/18/2004
This is quite interesting. But is it just me that I draw a little line between Orlando Turner, and Orlando Bloom? (who does have blonde hair and blue eyes as the insanely hot Legolas?)
Anyways, keep writing!
Hisan-sa chapter 1 . 12/12/2003
Write more write more! Awesome story! Must write more!
Demon of Chaos chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
That was fucking awesome. It's scary how you described Z. That's pretty much me to tell you the truth... hehe... I curse pretty bad in front of even teachers so... friends' moms are no acception. Keep up the good work!

Alliance Member 81 chapter 2 . 10/16/2003
Re:Your review. Actually,I've never seen Underworld. LOL! You're not the only one who's asked me that. Thank you for the review. Btw,nice work on your story as well.
SilverProphecy chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Will this help you write faster? C'mon, i've been checking up on the story everyday, please update soon!
Kirona of the skies chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
Wow! You've got something big going here! The prologue really drew me in, and now I desperately want to know what happens next. So hurry up and update! _
Kally chapter 1 . 9/7/2003
Please update soon! I really love your story and want to read more!
R. Madillo chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Wonder what happened to make the Catholic religion die out so quickly? And, it's interesting seeing things only a little in the future so that you can still relate.

And, about Zysa's red eyes; since this is under the category 'fantasy', can't help but wonder.. Are they natural? .'
MoonStoneMessenger chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
What? That can't be the end of the chapter! That Orlando Turner must be something eh? Really great beginning I have a clue of what might happen next. Update soon, I'll be waiting!
Ravage Blue chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
hee hee. this is good too. i like Zysa. she's got the right idea about school adn a war! hee hee. that was good. adn try to check out Yasha Hybrid. i'd preciates it! well GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Ravage Blue
Fantwriter chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
very good, lot's of dialogue though... cool a war! Get on with the fighting D
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