Another possible hit. However, I come to notice a common mistake you make. In sentences like:
"Much.", Liz said.
You don't need the period after 'much'. Replace the period with the comma and you'll be fine. Also, if the sentence ends in an ! or ? you don't need the comma. Just a little help. Please continue this story. It can only get better.

Hey...good. Dont forget bout me now, aight? Keep writing. Bye

1-800-find-my-muse yes, I believe I have spotted your muse at da beach ((Huntington!)), you might want to hurry and catch her SO YOU CAN UPDATE THE STORY THAT ROX ASS AND KILL OFF ZANDERS!

Gr ya I hate it when you start a really good story, and you've got the plot and all, and then you just loose it. lol I totally understand, I have about three or four stories I haven't updated in so long, hehe. Anyway, I hope you get past the writer's block thing, and get the passion to start writing it again, it's sounding really interesting.

This is quite interesting. But is it just me that I draw a little line between Orlando Turner, and Orlando Bloom? (who does have blonde hair and blue eyes as the insanely hot Legolas?)
Anyways, keep writing!

Write more write more! Awesome story! Must write more!

That was fucking awesome. It's scary how you described Z. That's pretty much me to tell you the truth... hehe... I curse pretty bad in front of even teachers so... friends' moms are no acception. Keep up the good work!

Rici-chan

Re:Your review. Actually,I've never seen Underworld. LOL! You're not the only one who's asked me that. Thank you for the review. Btw,nice work on your story as well.

Will this help you write faster? C'mon, i've been checking up on the story everyday, please update soon!

Wow! You've got something big going here! The prologue really drew me in, and now I desperately want to know what happens next. So hurry up and update! _

Please update soon! I really love your story and want to read more!

Wonder what happened to make the Catholic religion die out so quickly? And, it's interesting seeing things only a little in the future so that you can still relate.

And, about Zysa's red eyes; since this is under the category 'fantasy', can't help but wonder.. Are they natural? .'

What? That can't be the end of the chapter! That Orlando Turner must be something eh? Really great beginning I have a clue of what might happen next. Update soon, I'll be waiting!

hee hee. this is good too. i like Zysa. she's got the right idea about school adn a war! hee hee. that was good. adn try to check out Yasha Hybrid. i'd preciates it! well GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Ravage Blue

very good, lot's of dialogue though... cool a war! Get on with the fighting D