Reviews for Kissing Thin Air
CosmoBabe335 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
This is really beautiful...I think you could turn it into a poem though i'm not trying to force you to write it, lol. Anyway it is very moving and most definately in my faverites! Lol, I even showed my boyfriend, Tristan, and he really liked it as well.

Ok i'm rambling and telling you about all this stuff you probably don't really care about...but i couldn't careless! lol i'm so strange!

cya, CosmoBabe335, xxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
WannaBeABarrelRacer chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
wow. that was really good! i might have to print that out and send it to my boyfriend, hes at bootcamp for the summer. well, thanks for the great chap! i'll look at more of your stuff!~Em
Zo Lyon chapter 1 . 2/25/2006
hmm...nice..but..are you a girl also? or a guy? either way, into my favorites.
cdr1687 chapter 1 . 10/15/2005
I am curious as to what happened between him and the girl. Where did she go? Why arent they together anymore? Maybe in the next chapter you could answer these questions.
Flair Verona chapter 1 . 9/16/2005
This is a startling good story. You are very descreptive and I love that. It's beautiful and sad. It's that kind of bittersweet feeling. Sincerely,Flair Verona
TrueRomantic chapter 1 . 9/11/2005
The emotions felt so real and things flipped so quickly. It was one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. In fact, I was so inspired by it that I wrote a poem with the same storyline. Before I post it, I just wanted to get your permission first. If you want, I could send you the poem. Anyways, amazing story.
katieee chapter 1 . 7/18/2005
This was really good. very descriptive. Cady
lovelikeamixtape chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
What can I say besides: aw. This is so sweet and so beautiful. Great descriptions and metaphors.
Seda chapter 1 . 4/25/2005
that was really sweet...kinda makes me wish i had a boyfriend now, but i can relate to the whole "kissing thin air" deal...i guess i'm a hopeless keep it up :)
Forbidden Smiles chapter 1 . 2/6/2005
Beautiful. ]
cdr1687 chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
Wow that was really good. I am not usually one for one chapter things, but that was good. keep going.
doomweasel chapter 1 . 1/30/2005
Wow. This is a wonderful little gem. Your descriptions are almost poetry in their eloquence - kudos!
Mlle. Daae chapter 1 . 1/29/2005
Oh, that was really very good! I enjoyed it! ~Mlle. Daae
Finger Dingbat chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
lol, lovely writing, don't understand, is this slash or not? ah well, could be either! keep it up!
blacksunrise chapter 1 . 11/20/2004
this is very good ehmm how ever you might want ot mention slash or wat ever fictonpress calls it im not trying to be offense but it wasn't wat i was expecting
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