Reviews for Disturbed Doll
Children In Heat chapter 1 . 7/29/2005
I can't even come up with the right words, all I can say is that I really liked this poem. The Living Dead Dolls are really isperational, huh...well, it was a really good poem.
Screaming-Lies chapter 1 . 3/16/2005
*shudder* creepy, Oh not i have like 5 dolls is the other room, _ but whare is that doll..
melaniemelmelgirl chapter 1 . 11/6/2004
Wow this was a powerful poem, I liked it!~
Angelic-kat chapter 1 . 10/12/2004
Nice, chilling, but nice. I like the way you've written it, especially the last 2 lines.
Impy-Miss-Manson chapter 1 . 10/19/2003


I wrote a poem entitiled Dead Doll but it isn't NEARLY as awesome as this!

You are great at this stuff!

Keep on writing!.O
me10 chapter 1 . 10/10/2003
argh! scary!

ha ha i liked the imagery and your use of words! the rhyming was great too...unusual subject!
Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 8/8/2003

The images within your poem are beautifully yet disturbing done. Your views and thoughts on the subject stand greatly interesting and unique. Keep up the excellent work!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/6/2003
interesting, good imagery though, awesome job
Aake Redfield chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
Great piece of work! Very detailed and descriptive, and I especially like your theme. I have never seen rhymes flowing so well, you are a great writer. I'll stick around to read more. Bravo!