Reviews for The Answer in the Sky
Heavily Horizontal chapter 1 . 8/2/2004
This is so freakin nice! simple n sweet. no use of difficult vocabulary n yet turns out so good. but why isit soared like a dove? n not eagle or anything coz i dun really link dove with soaring...
moosesNOTmeese chapter 1 . 11/29/2003
I was really touched by the simplicity and total sweetness of this :-) Something about appealing to the sky is so romantic and magnificent, kind of conveyed a sense of helplessness in the face of something as huge and all-encompassing as love.
I would have used "Is" not "tis" in the second verse, and "soars" not "soared" to keep the tenses the same.
CaptainJackSparrowsWench chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
I really like your style, on all of your poems. They're all really awesome.
Lost-Without-Love-Angel chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
hi! as you have said i read your poem. this is wat i think of it. its very meaningful and inspirational, but it could b better if mayb u make it more longer or not as simple. well, a gud poem anyway!
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
i do like it. it reminds me of shakespeare, for some reason...i love your work. write more.
Faerie Corpse chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
This is beautiful! I wish I could write like that.
Ilsa Immerman chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Very sweet. Great flow. Profound in its simplicity. To sum up, loved it lots. _
Twisted Illusion chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
Oh this is now one of my favorite poems on here! Oh and I posted some new poems, check em out if you get a chance.