Reviews for She Was Happy
Sunflower Philosophy chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
This reminds me of two pieces of mine. One is a short story called "Stormy Sunlight", which I have posted, and one is a song I wrote like two years ago called "Before She Got Lost"- "She was happy/So happy/She was the sun shining down on the street/And she was friendly/So friendly/She make friends with everyone she'd meet" (can't say much for the poetry, but...) "And she was beautiful... Before she got lost/Deep in the mirror/Before she left us/To a world beyond..."

Very well done (obviously surpassing my own song on the subject...), and interestingly, "Stormy Sunlight" is also *sort of* about myself. The character is an exaggeration of me on both ends, and turned out not very much like me in the end... but still.

Why do I talk so much about myself when I review other people?

Great job!

m~* Sunflower, anyone?
creatureofnite chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
The syllable structure's a little dodgey at points, but it is a gorgeous poem. Does she get happy again?