|Reviews for Twister Claims A Lover|
| ColorCrayons chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
this is really really interesting and i LOVE the idea of it. maybe just a tiny bit more detail would be nice. other than that, great job
~color outside the lines~
| aviatrix chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
your use of onomatopoeia is effective. this might work better in story format; it's a bit long and rhythmless to work as a poem. also, consider breaking the poem up into stanzas; it's difficult to read such a long, interrupted reel of text. there's a few spelling errors as well. good on the whole, though.
| Gabrielle Debrette chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
That was sad, hopeful, it was good, I was in the mood for somthing like that!
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