|Reviews for Old Love|
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 4/20/2005
You've been busy tonight *lol* Hey, you're supposed to be on vacation in Florida—get off the machine. ;-*
Partings never been my forte,
Pointless at this juncture of time,
To even worry about it,
For first there has to be pairings,
& I feel so much like Eastwood,
Yeah—the big rugged actor type,
Right—I don't look like him at all,
But I feel his geriatrics,
They asked him how he wooed his gal,
¡He said with good noon siestas!
So that he could stay up nine,—
At this stage I think I'd sleep days,
Before I got to the first date,
Still—I'll build some endurance,
Run a few miles—Swim a few laps,
Then, I'll start working on the naps.
| me10 chapter 1 . 9/28/2003
aw...sad but i can understand. you described the situation well! :)
| Apollo chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
My favorite so far. It is very nice.
Nothing wrong with it I see. :-D
| yellow sparks chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
I like the two-line stanza's. They're simple, but really make the poem speak. Brings across a message that most in a once-meaningful relationship could relate to.
| TomAfton chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Ok, the meaning is there. The feeling is there, but barely. Some better description would help out a lot here.
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Aw... that's so sad. I really love ur writing, I'm gonna go read more. Keep it up!
| InSpiteOf chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
I liked the stanza, "Not the one we used had/ Which is what's making me sad". I remember feeling so sad because it's not the same. But that passes, after awhile. Why don't you IM me? ChinaLassie. We'll talk. :)
| Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Sad...I feel your pain!
| The intellect chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
aw, sad but true (to everyone i meen)
reminds me of my own shit but we all go through it i guess... not one of ur best but still it aint shit at all lol.
| NeoHaku chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
All I can say...very very strong! Love it! )
| Twisted Illusion chapter 1 . 7/31/2003
kinda angsty (I love angst, lol) I can really relate to this one tho.