Reviews for Josh |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Usually I like rhyming poetry...but somehow I felt this piece might've been stronger if you had dropped the rhyme scheme and went for bolder imagery. |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, I loved this! AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG BECCA! THAT WAS GREAT! It was so sad! But i loved it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AMAZING poem...I absolutely loved it! Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW...and more WOW. That was definatley one of the best poems I have ever read in my life...EVER. I like it a lot. Love it, actualy. How do you think of these things. I dont want to loose this so you and this poem is going on my favorites list. Keep up the good work. Really. ~*CaramelCream*~ P.S.: Did I mention that I love this poem? |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow.. i actually got to your first story u posted at *band playing and people cheering in background. confetti falling from the sky to celebrate Yasumine's [that's me]achievement of reading it all* lol. talk to me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks for the review. I like this poem, even though I don't drive I can relate to the poem. You have talent, I hope you continue writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like how you tell the story in the form of a poem... Great work! Keep writin'. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think that this poem really speaks to me and tells me to always look in the back of my seat when i don't have my cell phone, and also i like it cause this josh guy gets the car. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is really good! keep writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sniff* That's sad...but good. You're a good writer. |