Reviews for Josh
His Mercy's Waiting chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Usually I like rhyming poetry...but somehow I felt this piece might've been stronger if you had dropped the rhyme scheme and went for bolder imagery.
method acting chapter 1 . 3/26/2005
wow, I loved this! AWESOME!
Raven Nicolette Marchand chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
OMG BECCA! THAT WAS GREAT! It was so sad! But i loved it!
imxnotxyourxstar chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
AMAZING poem...I absolutely loved it! Great job!
CaramelCream chapter 1 . 11/25/2003
WOW...and more WOW. That was definatley one of the best poems I have ever read in my life...EVER. I like it a lot. Love it, actualy. How do you think of these things. I dont want to loose this so you and this poem is going on my favorites list.

Keep up the good work. Really.

~*CaramelCream*~

P.S.: Did I mention that I love this poem?
MousaS chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
wow.. i actually got to your first story u posted at *band playing and people cheering in background. confetti falling from the sky to celebrate Yasumine's [that's me]achievement of reading it all* lol. talk to me!
Myra Kilgore chapter 1 . 9/15/2003
Thanks for the review. I like this poem, even though I don't drive I can relate to the poem. You have talent, I hope you continue writing.
Anjeni Windsinger chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
I like how you tell the story in the form of a poem... Great work! Keep writin'.
Lion El' Jonson chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
I think that this poem really speaks to me and tells me to always look in the back of my seat when i don't have my cell phone, and also i like it cause this josh guy gets the car.
naturallyhighandinsane chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
this is really good! keep writing
The Mighty Dustmite chapter 1 . 8/2/2003
*sniff* That's sad...but good. You're a good writer.