Reviews for His Leaving
Aloria chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
wow... what a crazy man... hope MY boyfriend never does that to me! o.o; great description!
UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Awesome. I just about ALWAYS stay away from stories of any kind, but since it was you, I thought I'd read it.

And I haven't been disappointed, very very good. I think maybe try to find synonyms for some words though, like metal. Maybe use steel instead once P

But just read the first word I typed, that's what it is.