Were we supposed to not like Kyrie? Well I don't anyway. He hurt Laine and that is quite unforgivable. *coughs* a tad obsessed there.

I also like Haden, even though he is a psychopath and is really messed up in the head. Also, in the beginning ofchapter one, I seriously thought there could be a Haden/Laine pairing. (whee, wouldn't that have been fun?)

And Another cliff hanger. Why are you so good at those?

-sigh- I love it just as much as the outher one. Pleas write more.

O_O whoa... lots of stuff happened... i'm curious about laine though... i typed his name up in google and got practically zip... so i went to .com (that's where i get names) and there was nothing there either. T_T And I disagree with Kyrie... *huggles Laine* He's my favorite character in this story. Tarin's my second favorite character even though he's dead. I like Brennan well enough. I also almost like Haden in his twisted little way. Arella is cool. _ I don't like Kyrie just because he doesn't like Laine. *glomps Laine* *sticks tongue out at Kyrie* after my Ilo/Asha fan art, I'm drawing Laine! _ muwahahahahahahahahaha. fan art. muwahahahahahahahahahaha. _; okay. see you next chapter. (I sort of like Haden, but he kind of creeps me out. Hm. blah... *glomps Laine* problem solved...or not...)

Kya! A cliffhanger ending! Nu~ ;_; *clears throat* This chapter was a bit confusing until I realized that the beginning was a past life, but it was good. I just thought that I had missed another chapter or something. ;; Nice writing- as usual, you've outdone yourself!

WHAAH! What a horrible place to cut off. The suspense, the suspense. Its painful and truly so. GRAGH! How do you do it edana. You have once again roped me into your web of sweet complications and forced me into an all new universe to discover. And once again you are drawing me into a doomed love. WHAT HAPPENED! I must know whats up with laine and whats wronga bout him. The POOR kid is miserable as it is. What is he, like related to one of THEM? A prince of one of THEM? Well I guess Ill have to find out later ne? I hope you update soon!

Centi

great! i love your story!

I love your story!

I think it's really cool!

Laine is bad?

Well, keep writing please!

Your story is GREAT!

Big mistake? WHAT BIG MISTAKE? What is the mistake? You can't leave it off there! Damn, you're an amazing writer. Geeze, Imagine, finding out that you used to be another person and in love with a sick demented bastard? lol, good job Brennan. Alright, well, write again soon please. Wonderful job. Absolutely stunning. u.u

wow! another lovely story! i'm in love

I really don't like Kyrie. He's going to end up hurting the people he's trying to protect dammit.

As usual, this is amazing. I don't know who to feel more sympathy towards; Brennan or Laine. I mean, they both have it hard.

Well, i hope you update soon.

... Wow. I really can't say much more- I'm still feeling the aftereffects of that chapter. Wow. O.O

blah, so yeah it says I already submitted a review so I gotta review this way. GRAG! You meany. One you drag me into another one of your stories, two, you leave me hanging, and three you are just so durned good at writing. I believe I have a friend reading this story at this very moment. You have a thing for main characters with a darkness inside. I feel bad for laine and YIKES! I'm not liking where things are going. I really dont know what to say except please write more and write more soon, and please write more fallen cuz thats killing me too. ILO ILO I LOVE ILO AND ASHA AND ALEX AND ZAYN AND LAIN AND BRENNAN AND ALL YOUR CHARACTERS! *even yahto, but so far not likin haden, yick* THATS ALL and one more thing before i go. BURNING CHICKEN POOP! HAH!

~Centi

Hey! Why is he being drawn into Haden's lair? /

I love Brennan and him together. They're so adorable... and umm... depressed. -.-;

I want them to get together soon! woot woot! D

Blah. won't let me review again. And yup, I was confused at first... (about the chapter thing... cuz i could have sworn i read chapter two... but the text was different) O_O. Ai ya yi! Laine, what are you doing? -_-; Oi... is Haden gonna kill him? And Kyrie is such a paranoid prat... o_O; He almost killed Laine! I like Arella. _; Heh... strong minded female. Anywho, update soon! I think this is my favorite out of all the stories you've written thus far. (I still love Asha though. P) Okies. i just wanted to put my 2 cents in. I have, so now I'm off. Bye! Update son!

I really like where this is going. You have an amazeing style and this story juts seems so interesting. I love the name Brennan to! Yay! And Laine is another cool name, as well as a cool anime! Whoo! I'm really impressed with this and I can't wait to see this come along.

I read it i read it , aren't you proud of me? I must admit I'm still a bigger fallen fan but me likies this so far and I'll take anything new I can get from the amazing edana! WHO! Wierdness though, it'll be interesting to see where this goes.

~Centi