Reviews for The Piper
Etheral chapter 1 . 1/21/2004
Very, very interesting! Great job! I need something else to say!
Alyssha
Mbwun chapter 1 . 10/23/2003
Good; I loved the last line.

He Who Walks On All Fours
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
Nice poem, I like the rhyming in it. Very interesting subject too. Keep it up.

CT
BelovedMoon chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Wow that was great! You tell great story-ish poems. That's like, one of my favorites! The rhyming was great, and so was the imagery. It was a good poem about war...oh the symbolism. Great job!