Reviews for Tea Time
Aloria chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
I'm reminded of the online comic 9th Elsewhere ( w. / if you're interested). this seems like a really surreal poem.. _ great work!
Starlight Maiden chapter 1 . 8/10/2003
It is dark stuff. Indeed. Good though, enchanting.
Cirien Phoenix chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
(*Is drinking tea, then looks suspiciously at the glass*) Hmm... (*slowly and cautiously puts it down*) This is a great great great great great poem! (*Fave poems list!*) Keep up this amazing work, Ms. Edena-Tala!

Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
You know, this makes me think of a sadistic whorehouse, especially when you got towards the end. The words really crawl under your skin. And the tone gets deeper and darker as the poem goes on. It's really awesome. The rhythm rocks also P
Carter Tachikawa chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
Wow, this was really interesting. I have an urge to drink tea now 0_o. Anyway, like the ending the best. Good stuff, keep it up. (Sanford? I know where that is! Woohoo, not too far from where I live.)

CT
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
O, that is funny, I love the ending. just some parts are out of rhythm, like the stanza 2nd from the end, and ...no, wait, that's all...okie _