Reviews for Rhymings of a Teenage Monster
Squishy Perry chapter 1 . 11/15/2003
Hey Dee!

These are all awesome pieces of writing. I am just wondering who "Lair" was written for? Great job on all of these poems! **is now speechless**

flamearrows chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I really enjoyed this compendium of poetry, and I hope you decide to write more. I especially liked "sharp redemption", and you were certainly right - "Through pain my soul wins!" seems to be the sentiment echoed in many of the poems on fictionpress. If I could offer one comment - Don't let rhyming cage your poetry. It doesn't have to be anything other than what you want it to be. 'course, if you want it to rhyme, then go for it :)

all in all, very good

aviatrix chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
oh, brillo pads. especially the first one. great stuff you have here.
black-butterfly2704 chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
hmm interesting bit of poems there. its cool though...that's what the world need. controversy