An intriguing story topic. It holds promise and is very original.

sunflowersing

Hey, good job so far. This looks like it could develop into something really good. Oh, note that at the beginning you started off in first person and then went into third. But other than that, great job!

Sounds interesting, and like something girl friends can relate to.
Can't wait to see what you come up with.

hahhaa like cross roads. cute. continue!

hey this is good

im excited for it

update soon

I just decided to see what else you have written and I must say, this attracted me for some reason. I'm curious on what's gonna happen. Can't wait to see new chapters on either of your stories.

A good start. I hope you continue. )

hey this is good. are you planning on continuing it?

OH sounds interesting. I love the makes u feel like u know the people before the story begins. I can't wait to read more!

hey, it's realli good

keep writin!)