That is truly magicly, a much ?friendlier? peom that the others. It's more love and friendship based rather than tragic and dark. I really like it. WD

Wow, I wish someone could love me like that. Very strong and beautiful.

gee, that was so good, no wonder it "sat" on your chest for so long (must have gotten a bit heavy! :) )
worth the wait!
sniff! i love romance...

very emotional

I like the poem a lot. It could even be used as a wedding vow. The poem is filled with Love. Very beautifully written.

Wow! :-)

Very good! i think it's very good! I also think you are very insistant to have this on for a year and half.

I loved the devotion that has been poured into this poem... once again open honest... the imagery you've used was wonderful... constantly flowing... and really something that wasn't beyond the reader's capability to imagine.

A very good romantic poem. It reminds me of my own experiences.

Keep it up :)

That was a beautiful freeverse. - I liked the flow.

well i am not sure what to say about this poem.

It's strong

it's filled wiht emotion

it;s about something i know it

something personal i just could never put my finger on it

it was a bit long

but thast what it took

it's beautiful especialy the end

very...romantic...

~Angerona the Goddess of Death~

I thought this poem was ery moving. It made me want to know who you were writing to. Please come and review my poetry. I would like to have the opinion of such a good writer.

really deep i liked it alot you are a great writer.

Spectacular poem. Colorfully written, vibrantly described, this is a great piece of writing. Well done.

I defintitely feel the emotions in this poem . . . good job!