This is some good work, I hope you can finish this soon.

So Awesome, please update? Pleawse? You have such talent, dont waste it!

This is my favorite story on this site so far. It's almost like Evangalion, only less confusing. I hope that you continue with this. More fights!

~Lost and With a Purpose

YEAH! We finally got to meet ze Children of Eden! Wootles. *Is perfectly aware that will come out 'Wotles.'* I hope to see chapter five soon!

::- ~* Selena *~ -::

Interesting, definetely interesting. You have some good ideas here _

Strange that I was listening to 'Don't Fear the Reaper' while reading this. I liked it a lot; to my knowledge it's very original and I like the idea of the angels being 'bad' because of God's orders. He doesn't seem like the nicest guy in the old testament. I also like all the references to the Bible, such as Gensesis and Eden and such. I like it!

nice try on the eva-remake. I think it's tad bit cliche in that area. I understand it's hard to be creative now that so many people have thought of so much stuff, but I suppose it is hard to write something so complex and get away with it.

I suggest you re-think your plot and try making it sound less Eva and less along the lines of Eva.

YAY! New chapter! And it was long too! I can't wait for the next one! Keep writing! I think you should have more of Raiu...he's cool! _

YAY! I really like this story! Keep updating! Very original story line...although Ch. Three was a bit confusing...oh well a good excuse to read it again _

This is such a huge rip-off of Evangelion, it's not even funny. The only thing I can say is well-written, as in grammer

Oh! INTERESTING-LIKENESS! I hope you update this one really soon, Finney Bart. T'is uber cool...

::- ~* Selena *~ -::

...Did I just say 'uber cool?'

Nice. _ I love the whole "angels are evil" and "God wants to destroy humanity" concept. It's a total reversal of what most people would think. _v originality

I can't fav yet, but I'll keep my eye on it. In the meantime; write more!

I really like your story! I hope you update soon _ I esp. Like the names you gave to the things in your story!