Reviews for Broken By a Bottle
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/4/2004
Excellent words! Wonderful rhyming! The chorus was genious and the title also. It flowed so well! An excellent poem!
Sleepykitten chapter 1 . 1/3/2004
I couldn't relate to this from a familial perspective, but this rings true even for friendships broken by a bottle. For only being 19, you have a really profound way with words. Your writing is very admirable.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
once again, you write some real awesome lines:

"And if you continue

down this path you follow

we’ll become: just another home

broken by a bottle"

my best friend's dad is an alcoholic and i see the effect it has...there's a lot of sucky things in the world. so, er, i wont dwell on it. Capitals. I need to use my capitals. Sorry, yes, I am always weird like this.
madnesswearsasuit chapter 1 . 8/5/2003
I really like this song. It's so true, which is sad but I like how you've managed to make the lines interesting, instead of too forward and boring. I really like this line however:

"We’ll become: just another home

Broken by a bottle"

But yeah, this flows well and has a good meaning so A.
Winged One1 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
I like this a lot. It really gets its point across. It reminds me of a song by Nickelback, can't remember what it's called...Never Again, I think. Anyway, good song.

winged one