Reviews for Crimson Tears
B. Ann W chapter 5 . 9/13/2003
This is great! I love this! I don't care if there is any gramar mistakes, you have a great talent for writing. You don't make it like life is fine all the time. You make it how life really is. Awesome, keep writing!
B. Ann W chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Man, I've read a couple of these stories posted on this site and I've only read chapter one and it roxs!
Rune Almstrom chapter 5 . 9/12/2003
Two suggestions - seperate your dialogue on seperate lines, so that we know who's talking and it doesn't get jumbled. Secondly, seperate your paragraphs into smaller chunks and double space in between them. It makes it a lot easier to read when there's short segments. Great story, and thanks for adding me to your favorites
fearphobic chapter 4 . 8/17/2003
wow! i really like it! keep writing more...i wanna read more...
iona-buss chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
hey i really like this story keep writing please.
behind.the.facade chapter 1 . 8/8/2003
Great story!
Fox Otter chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
Great start! I can't wait to
AVIGON chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
Not bad. I wouldn't mind reading more of this...
NaiveDreamer16 chapter 1 . 8/4/2003
I loved it! Good start