I liked this poem. A lot. adding to fave stories. THis was really good. I actually followed it and it flowed really well.

i love rain...beautiful poem keep up the good work!

_ Thanks for the review, any one I showed just, "so?" I'm truely touched you liked it enough to review.

And with this poem... _

It's hard to say, seeing as I just LOVE the rain, summer or winter. Sweet music to the knowing ear.

"If the heavens where to cry, there true tears and pain for this world,

We would call it rain,

And drown in the water and sorrow."

Keep writing,

Lilith

wow. that's all I can really say. Wow. .

Great imagery and word choice. Beautiful work.

-Seras

lol on your a/n. i really like your style of writing poetry, you have a gift with the words. very good.

This was beautifully written. You created some lovely imagery with your description. I love rain...usually :) Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*

Wow, that was amazing. I really liked it a whole lot. good job!

Beautiful.

Hey don't dis the rain! I liked playin in it at Traverse City, it smells YUMMY! Anyway another great poem (i'm just trying to get into charector for halloween)! Um nice words and um it's really good. BYE!

hey ugaboo! luv the poem...better than what ill eva write... i dont wanna play in cold and rain wahh! jk well still great poem the only problem is that im an athiest..but that really doesnt matter...so great poem luv it! xox jojo