I don't know what it either...but it's neat. way to go, little blue man.

Very nice. I really like the fragmented thought pattern one gets as they read this piece.

It gives the reader a sense of loss and keeps their attention to the very end.

It reminds me of a song I heard once, but I can't think of it right now. But this has the same kind of broken thout patterns which I really enjoy.

Cheers.

cool

I dunno abotu you but I liked it;)

interesting, think it needs some puncuation but other then that i like this a lot, its something to think about, nicely done

i liked this a lot. It great how you can put random thoughts like that together to make something so great. you might wnat to work on it a little bit though.

well, i don't know what it is either, but i like it...it sounds like...i don't know. it just like it alot. but why do document uploads work for others and not me? why..? why! okay, just raving because FP hates me and won't work..i'll go now.

i really liked your last line, and some of the flow of the poem, but it didn't really catch my attention - you might need to do a little more work on it.