this is a cute little haiku

That was very good for starters! Believe me I'm no good when I first started!

very nice imagery

wow, very nice, much better than my haiku's, lol.

Lyn

you're definitely one of the few people who can actually write incredible haikus, and i commend you for it, because only quite insightful and philosophical people are capable of mastering it.

Awesome! I just love the words you used! THat was really cool!