Well, the story is interesting. Could use a little more description and a bit of spell checking. But otherwise I can't even beginning to think of all the places this story could go. Keep working on it.
P.S I've never shared my name with a vampire before, not until now.

I don't like people who leave cliff hangers and then don't update... You don't want to see me angry. I may not be a vampire but that doesn't mean i can't do damage... update soon or else

This is a good story...I wish it would continue. The whole concept is only just getting interesting.

Hmm, how interesting. I love stories about vampire hutners. *grins* anyway, I love the way that you explain the whole 7 masters thing. I really haven't heard anything like that before. I suggest using a little more descritptive words. Don't tell what things look like, use the words to show what they look like. Other than that, just vary your sentences around so they don't start with "he" and "she" all the time. Hmm, very nice all in all. Update soon.
happy hunting and thanks for your review...
~Midnight Predator~

Great story keep up the good work and add more soon! (Thanks for reviewing my story)

Evil cliffhanger, oh well, it makes the story more interesting. Definitely an awesome story for your first vamp. story. Plz update!

This is excelent!

How did I miss this one.

It is a really intersting concept.

Keep writing.

there's a couple of mistakes here and there but otherwise it's fine

Great story though, I can't wait for you to update!

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hey! that was good. YAY! A MASTER! FIGHT! cool. adn you palyed flute? that is cool. we ahve a whole lot in common. it's kind of scary. oh well. you're in the eighth grade? so am i. this is really scary. but cool. okay i don't like pink myself, but it was the only thing i could think of. i couldn't think of any other good matches. it will change though. well GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Ravage Blue

Sorry it took so long for me to read this but...

That was Great! COME ON GO ON! DON'T STOP NOW!

THAT WAS AWESOME! you're pretty good at this. i'm basically returning a favor! (smiles) you reviewed my story not too long ago. i read you review adn you adn i liek alot fo tehs ame things. i noticed you liked the soultaker. hee hee. if you ever wnat to check out my other one, "yasha Hybrid", pelase do. i liek reviews! i'll go check out your other one. GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Ravage Blue

not too shabby. I liked it, and would like to see a bit more.

great job keep writing

pretty good for a first chap...though i caught a lot of spelling errors, (ex medieval not mid-evil) but all in all a good plot...hope there's more.