Reviews for You Are The Nightmare
PaulAsaran chapter 1 . 5/12/2004
I'm impressed; this is a fascinating piece of art.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 3/1/2004
I just realized this poem kinda sucks.. hm poor me. Why am I reviewing myself? Who knows. lol
KayBird chapter 1 . 8/23/2003
Woww! I absolutely love this poem! It is creepy but very true in many ways! You have a way with words and I love it! Oh, and thank you for reviewing my story "Softest Breath". That was very nice of you. And I can definatly understand your pain. Very good! Keep writing!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
interesting, muchly like this one, think its fairly well written, think that if it was separated into stanzas and the puncuation was used a bit more clearly then just mostly commas at the end of every line it would make this a lot more powerful then it is, otherwise, muchly like the concept and a bunch of the imagery in here, fairly strong ending too, nicely done
Lestette chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
I really like the line "You Killed my dreadful existing soul" I think it's beautiful... I see beauty in darkness and dispair *shrugs* call it a gift. But this is really well writen and described... I really like this alot.