Reviews for Last Chance
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
This is really good, I really like this one. But what was really good was this whole part:

"Your playing with fire

your bound to get burned

And I don’t want to see you

when the tables have turned

You’ve still got a chance now

before fate has you found

and I don’t want to be there

when it comes crashing down"

I mean, every line was great. Rock on.
avidelecteur chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Really good and flowing! VERY well written. I'm amazed.
Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
wow! im so jealous, your so talented.I really liked the lines "Its all up to you, Dont become what he put you through."

That was quite...well relatable (is relatable a word? O.o) anywho, lovin all your stuff!