There must be some hidden references that only women pick up on. This girl's freaky. I like that. Oh, and I like the humor too.

This seems directed towards a female audience. Not my kind of thing, but I'll read this to the end because it's very well-written.

Hey Di.
That was lovely, I really liked it.
And ah, you described my mate Mat but called him Chris. It's insane. I don't trust myself with him after dark because I'm usually rather drunk and he was in love with me once. It's not the most reliable relationship, in the sense that it could blatantly turn physical at any minute. But he'll never leave, and I'll never leave, it's one of those life-long things.
I miss you, it's been a while.
I hope you've had a certain phonecall that you needed.
P.s. Keep writing babe.
Luc x

This is a great story. I loved it. Great Job!

How in the Holy Hell does one properly review this? Let me start by saying, well done...excellent style(all your own) certainly no pretense or adaptation of a style...the writer writes...and never tells all..but...surely gives an insight...as I said in another review...of the feminine side of the world of libido...there is perhaps a little too much 'truth' here...a'questioning' of what does it all really mean after all...a word of advice to a writer...most of the names that you use of contemporaries are not known by most and will be quickly forgotten in short span...(we all think our generation rules...but it does not)...a lasting work...would be more generic...more...universal to tempt those who may read a few years down the road...stripped of all the colloquialisms...and looked at for the bare theme...I see a search for meaning underway...and I wish you well, I would not again...go back through those years...page by page..and try to understand the why's and wherefore's...very telling write, thank you...amicus...

Read the first two chapters, very funny! I'll be back for more..just can't read it all in one go..i'll review again, just wait...)

That was magnificent! I totally love it! This is kind of the chapter I’ve been waiting for- since _I_ am nineteen- it’s just like to see ‘Tara Morris’s point of view on it all. But I totally loved all this- it’s all just so… believable. It’s like everything has happened in real life- and you can see it all playing out in your head. Good ol’ Chris…

You know, I really don’t know what to say- it’s all too good.

hehehehe….

You’ve made me all nostalgic and stuff! This Chris guy sounds highly familiar, though… Actually, when you said about how every girl has a ‘why have we never got together’ guy you got me thinking. I really do have no idea… But I think that would be Jason Scupham. This is such a weird feeling… all remember-y and shit.

Good to know the guy is at least *thinking* about sticking around. I cannot wait to see the finale, though- I’m all excited! Everything about this whole story seems so realistic- it’s amazing. I’m not sure whether you’re just working off what has already happened or what- you are just such an amazing writing. You know what, I’m going to go do some writing, now. ~J.

God, I can't believe it took me so long to read this...

Haha! I like this whole familiarizing myself with teh character stuff (despite the fact that i STILL don't think we know her name)..she seems to be jsut a quirky individual who does things at the moment...also seems she would be pretty flexible to wherever and whenever life's gonna hit.

And her little brother David sounds cute too...*gets naughty ideas*...NO *slaps self* None of that!

EEsh. I think I AM going hormonal...

Heh. Anywho. Great chapter! *grin*

again, an awsome chapter, i like the past in present story line, if you follow me...to my room _~ i awiat nineteen impatiently lol

luv ya

me!

x

Im only half way through the chap, but i have to say it, I love your taste in Music, A Perfect Circle rule, my favs Weak and Powerless, anyway, i'll review the rest of this chap, in my review of the next chap, ttfn.

bye x

You know, in every word of this you shine through. And the whole idea of this Nick guy is just ironic… considering ‘recent circumstances’. I can’t wait to see how you’re going to manage to finish this off…

And how did I know, somehow, deep somewhere in my head, that when you walked in Nick would be watching Gonzo? I saw that coming so far ahead that it was so freaky when I read it.

Quite frankly, I really don’t know what to say that I haven’t already said. It’s brilliant. It’s totally you. You need to publish a book. You would make millions. I’m glad I’m back.

~J

Hm… I definitely like the way this is going! I’ve got to say that the second paragraph of this chapter is possibly one of the best things I have ever read next to when Alex Rider was trying to break out of a fish tank using zit-cream in Anthony Horowitz’ Stormbreaker. I see why your brother liked it. Oh, and you were seriously disappointed with the new Nirvana album? Come one, Cobain’s dead- I think it’s pretty fucking amazing of him to record three new songs and send them down from the afterlife for Dave Grohl to mess with. Alright, alright, it sucked…

Anyway, j’adore. Magnifique. Bene, bana bene. T’excite pas, mec. Non t’incazzare ragazzo. Ai shiteru. Ai…

I wonder what’s on MTV… Christ you’re good. This is just as good as the last part- you are a seriously good writer, and should publish a book immediately because it would hit no.1 in the charts. Your style is brilliant. And, once again, I can’t wait for the next part. Excellent story too of course. And, seriously, you have no milk? There are a couple of lines that stick out that seem almost certainly quote-worthy, but I can’t be bothered to pick them out. You’re way too good.

*smacks Nick over the head*...stupid boy.

Actually, this whole relationship between main-character and Nick is kind of confusing, although I know there are relationships like this out there.

Then again, could be the fact that it's 2 a.m. on my side of the planet and I'd been sweating and jumping around all day (yes, despite the surgery...my toe.. It throbs).

ANYWAYS. Marvellous work from you, and I await the next chapter. I'm beginning to feel a little attached to these characters (oddly enough)

meh. sleep. *konks out*