Reviews for No Requiem
this is my love for you chapter 1 . 6/10/2005
Short, but beautiful and deep.
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 6/9/2005
there are no words to describe this, sheer beauty in essence. captured beautifully. lovely, lovely haiku.

!~* noelle *~!
frugale chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
I love this. There are no words ...
eddie chapter 1 . 11/14/2003
I liked it much olot
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 9/21/2003
absolutely amazing. that was so beautiful... sums up rock bottom for me... that pit of depression you actually learn to welcome, coz things only get better after that... lovely work
OracleVIII chapter 1 . 9/13/2003
Jimmy Jazz chapter 1 . 9/6/2003
Amazing! I love this, it's like... I don't know, I can't explain, but it's awesome!
soulspring chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
simply beautiful; awesome job!
SiLVER999 chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Ohh this is so beautiful.

Absolutely genius. No joke.
Lady of the Moon chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
great idea behind it. I like this poem. But in the first line I think bound by shackles would look and sound a bit better than bonded by. Bonded gives the impression that you are apprenticed or something, but I just read to many fantasy books most likely.

Asta Chantrea Orra
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
very nice I can picture it very well... makes me happy! thanks for the review!
glitterjewele chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
*sigh* how, i repeat HOW can you possibly convey so much emotion and truth in twenty-three words? "dreams flicker off" in particular got my attention, because it followed shackles, and most people focus on losing the shackles or else binding the dreams, and the inversion of these two common concepts completely warped their meaning and potential in my little brain, 'twas fun. :) also, the italicized "cry" made a huge impression on me. it was like the voice of an angel urging you to release all your pent up anger and frustration and thus heal yourself ('you will soon be flying'). awesome piece, yet again. kudos chica. :)
Mime chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
Very inspirational piece...I loved it!
Stoffpferd chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Oh, I like this very much. Another very well written piece of yours!

cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
This is beautifully written. I must read some of your other pieces. Keep writing :)

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