nice work!

This was realy beautiful... breathtaking actually. I really liked it. You should write more poetry. Anyway, I think that you reviewed for my story and I wanted to thank you so... thanks.

no matter what the circumstance, still surviving..

This is so strong and powerful. I understand your feelings.

God. That poem almost made me cry! It reminds me of how I feel about my friend Sarah...yea, you don't care but just wanted to say that it was great...and powerful.

I shall go read more now.

Cheerio

Rayne

PS If you have AIM talk to me.. Atari4182

Cool and calming because of the 'I'm still breathing', everything is forced to exhale deeply and try to understand.

'an ocean spirals to turn crimped' interesting image! Unique way of saying it.

Trying to reassure them- you're losing yourself 'engulfing', but 'still breathing' is almost a contradiction in tone. Intriguing paradox.

Strong and determined 'Enduring', 'stll breathing'.

I like that, its strong.

that was very nice. I'd like to say which part i liked best but i'd probably repeat most of your lines.

Thank you for reviewing. You really should have more poems to read. Maybe you'd like to read kamikaze899's poems. They're good.

My other works are under liquor chugging knight, and are not under the same kind of category as to when i write under this penname.

Keep up the good work and more power. :)

very pretty and interesting, love a lot of the paradoxes in this one, muchly good, excellent job

:/ Aww, wow, who did you write that for..?