I like it! So, is this going to be one of those conspiracy stories where she leads him on to believe she is more than a commoner? Or should I call it a cinderella story? Either way, I like it! Please continue!

I'm likin' the story so far. Bravo. Please update soon!

For a Title ... perhaps something about seeing what's on the inside instead of someone's title since Adam doesn't like being called Sire, etc. And since Kelsey doesn't seem to be the person to care about anybody's title... it's a two way thing. :)

Also - might want to reread after using spellcheck. Like 'if' instead of 'is' :) That's all. Happens to the best of us. Added to favorite stories list!