Reviews for Town Without Pity |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i like this :D please continue soon! |
![]() ![]() i wish u would write wore of this story i think its cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...*Cough* I have a gaydar, even thought it sounds so stereo-typical. It comes with being bisexual, luv. ;3 Nich and Kris are cute, though I noticed that you used their names for "European Beauty" as well, yeh? Lovely story so far, update as soon as possible. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's interesting! And only a tad bit cliche, hehehe. The bubbliness of the characters balances it out, though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I can’t believe how much your writing improved! Not that it was horrible before or anything, but…whoa. As a writer, you’ve grown a LOT. I read European Beauty right before I started on this [the names were similar so I thought it might be a continuation] and I was completely floored. This is excellent! There’s good character development, really great prose, etc. I hope you decide to continue this… it’s great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're evil! lol, jk! It's good so far so please continue! Can't wait to find out what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *poke/glare* Why din'cha finish? I wish you would. Kris Roe being gay is one of the happiest [haha] things I can think of. And yes, gaydar for all. |
![]() ![]() I like ur story so far (barely on chap.2) |
![]() ![]() sorry I just don't wanna sign on right now. but I love your story. this one has to be my all time fav. out of the whole site! well KEEP IT UP. I'll be leaving soon (Mill.) and I don't know when I'll be back by a computer ok ok. |
![]() ![]() Wonderful as always... i love his mom! she's hilarious _ n perfect gaydar would be cool! tho. mine isn't too horrible... |
![]() ![]() ![]() good chapter. keep them comin! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truthfully your writing is so great. HOWEVER in chapter four when you concentrated it got alot better. On a positive note... IT'S ENTERTAINING! Which is a huge compliment from someone who HAS to be entertained every single second. I'll continue to read if you continue to write. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() it was really good but i think you should update like really really soon because i cant wait to see what happens... |
![]() ![]() ![]() update Update UPDATE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() _ Cuteness |