Reviews for Up and Rise the Morning Star
Silence-endlessecho chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
To have someone write that.. to have someone feel that. You're way of expressing such a deep sentiment and feeling is unique and motivating. This poem is absolutely amazing! And it's real. And talent plus reality and depth of raw feeling and strength make up a great poem. That's what this is.
i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
You've taken a subject that's so common it's almost lost it's meaning, and you've injected a new truth, life, and love to it. Your style, that's all I can say, it's your style that completes this.

I'll say this to you and your friend, as my best friend and I always say:

"Keep breathing."
TomAfton chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Great poem.