|Reviews for Lost and Found|
| i was a postcard chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
I liked this up until the last verse..or stanza, I don't remember my literary terms lol. Well, actually, it's really just the first line. It...doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the poem. But then again, it is strange and this poem is unique, so I suppose they're in the same family.
After that line, I liked how the "little boy" was given answers. I used to write stuff like that. This is a creative piece of work, and you did well.
BTW, thanks for the review on my poem. And the reason there's not a lot of figurative language in it is because poems don't always have to have figurative language and imagery and whatnot. Yes, it was just there, and it was supposed to be. It's a style. Called free-verse. :)
EEp, I hope I don't sound condscending up there. Anywho, thanks for being honest. We need more honest people on . I prefer (sometimes harsh) critique to useless praise...I've rambled long enough! Great poem, adios!