Reviews for And i cut myself tonight
Stormyfirefly2 chapter 1 . 11/7/2005
sad...its all i can say.
prayers for rain chapter 1 . 11/30/2004
I can identify myself pretty well with your poem. Cutting just to see the blood and to know that you're real and that you live... Great work.
suicidel angel chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
i like the whole word play thing, it's short but effective
New Age Prophet chapter 1 . 11/13/2003
Really fucking intense. Counseling not to be rude but serious cutting yourself is not shit that your friends can help you with. Go to counseling really.
Lost-in-Insanity chapter 1 . 10/6/2003
This one t'is strange ; good, still strange
wordpainter241 chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
My God you rock... (and I need to expand my review vocabulary)
Izzy Diz chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
I like the title.. It grabbed my attention quite quickly.. Well done! You live! ~Bwahahaha~ *cough* Sorry _'

Izzy Diz

Ps- GO AUSTRALIA! _
Smoky Bear chapter 1 . 9/29/2003
ah it's you... hello, nice to see you're branching out into new screenies...

this was great... the second stanza really kicked something... i've been guilty too... good job!
lronMaiden chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Great poem, I like it 'cos it's freaky and very real...kep up the work.

ps. Thanks for the comment on Terra Australis...I was wondering why you liked that particular section until I found out you were from Australia. lol.

AUSSIE AUSSIE AUSSIE! OI OI OI!
The intellect chapter 1 . 8/30/2003
i love the title... really cool for some random reason.

''And I cut myself tonight

Just to prove I could''

i love this bit... makes out like your trying to make a stand to someone

maybe a bit too much repeating of blood and bleed?

the intellect
psycho tabby cat chapter 1 . 8/25/2003
Sorta sad...

I think the scary thing is that I can sorta see why somebody would do that...

The repetion is good, well written

D
My Works 87 chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
Wow, this is kind of creepy, yet it makes complete and total sense to me. Does that make sense? I don't cut myself or anything (not that you though I did) but her/his reasons behind doing it are understandable. After reading this poem I want to find the person and help them out. Is that wierd? Maybe my maternal instincts! haha. Very good job, bravo!
ironic li chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
"when everything feels like the movies/yeah you'd bleed just to know you're alive" -goo goo dolls, iris.

i think that this carries the essence of mankind thinking that we are great, and that we have knowledge and power, and yet most of us aren't really sure who we are.

ISL
meudick chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Really?

You? Bleed?

My, my that is strange isn't it?

I never wouldn't predicted that outcome.

Excuse the bitch talking, I'm back to my original self, but since there's at least three of me, God knows who that actually IS!

I love ya, and I understand ya, you know that.

And you know that this rulz.

And you know that I can relate to this.

And you know who this is. I don't actually have to be bothered loging in do I?

PS I love you... (there, if you don't know who it is now, ask yourself how many strangers go around saying they love you...)
LLight chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
... its really good, i need to see the life flowing from me sometimes too just to assure myself that I'm real... you seem to know where I'm coming from, or I think you do cuz I want someone to know where I'm comin from, hehe...

great poem, keep writing.
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