Reviews for How much deeper
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
You showed desparation in this poem very well, I can almost taste it. This had a nice flow, very casual in a good way. I like that it didn't rhyme because it makes it seem more urgent. Good work. Review Marathon Weekend (link in profile)!

-Peace out.
Rose Dark Thorn chapter 1 . 5/6/2004
Deep enough to kill.
This poem is cool.
You shoukd write more.
wordpainter241 chapter 1 . 9/30/2003
I think I'll log out and review you 1 billion times because only two other people have reviewed this. How fucking rude! It rocks!
suicidel angel chapter 1 . 8/26/2003
wow excellent poem, you have more? put em up! or atleast add a link onto your other accounts?
broken wings241 chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
You bitch, you don't recieve anon reviews. YOU MADE ME LOG IN... just to tell you how wonderful you are adn how much I love this poem.

Btw, you must have a new record, two new accounts in less than two months.

Anyhoo, love the name, love the poem.


Love ya.
Conker chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Nice. Succinct, and it manages to convey a tone of desperation, which is good. The only thing I can critique is in the fourth line, I think "fell" should read as "feel". Just a lil typo. Anyway, I like the poem.

Keep writing.