Reviews for The best years of our lives Yeah, right
Tenshi-Chikyuu chapter 2 . 4/11/2009
so...Emerald seems more clever than me...and plays Tenor v_v oh well. Dont think I didn't see the Jenn thing... Jeremy... I'm curious if you were referring to a real person here... this was soo long ago... its not bad tho..
lifeisbeautiful chapter 2 . 8/23/2004
This is really good, i've really enjoyed it. you should defenitely add more. The only problem i had with it was that you told us a bit of what would happen int the 1st chapter, in brackets. you shouldn't do that, it ruins it. And maybe a bit more description would add to the story, description from her point of view would let us understand her better. What she wears, what she thinks of the other people in her class, does she think the schools ugly? I dunno, just random stuff like that. It's really good though. Congrats, keep up the good work