|Reviews for Name|
| Leah Claire chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
I liked that. Especially the last five lines. Those ones really forced a vivid image on me.
The fourth line "Do you see m-" I at first thought was the narrarator being cut off in mid-sentence. Then I thought it was a typo. Now I'm not sure. I'm not even sure if I consider it a big enough deviation to be an interruption of the flow. It didn't hurt my enjoyment of the poem. I suppose that's where you get the final call, and you obviously left it in for a purpose.
| Lidless Eye chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
I liked how this one ended. Gives you something to think about.
| rainypromise chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Hey, I just wanna say. It was good it sets of a kind of atmosphere. I'm not really knowledgable about poetry but I know what I like. What touches me. And this did.
| AutumnKrystals chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Ahh! I remember this one too! I loved it - the whole mystery lover who leaped off... to worlds unknown. Awesome.