Reviews for Under Bleeding Sky
E. Hisifithith chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
Hey! You've gotten kind of angsty! WHAT IS THIS WORLD COMING TO! oh well! lots of lovely (well...) poetry comes out of all this angsty-ness! WONDERFUL PEICE!

Argenta chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Very good.
UnknownWanderer chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
It's very dark, and I enjoy the tempo and note that the end of each line hits. Very nice work, I especially like the 2nd to last line.
dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
This was interesting. I liked it. Also, I love all of your poetry. You do so good. This stuff is amazing! I mean it! You deserve praise!

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
ionlyliveindreams chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
Wow... very good poem. Very descriptive. In some cases it's kinda creepy, but this was really good. I loved the last line. Actually I liked the last two lines. Very good poem!

Keep writing