Reviews for Life's a Bitch
handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
I like this poem a lot. The emotions show through very vividly. I found it to be deep and funny at the same time. Very good !
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
whoa... kinda...vile.. but i like.

ittybittytreefrog chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
My, but we're angry today. Life's not all that bad. *backs away slowly*
Lady B.V Rose chapter 1 . 8/21/2003 word: WOW! _

This rules! My phone greeting's actually "Life's a bitch, then you die."

_ Brilliant!
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
you know, this may be even too buntly pessimistic for me. (did i just say that!)

the whole tittle/end thing is cool, but it hink maybe you want to work on imagery a bit- the whole heart with butcherknife sounds a little old, and since you bothered to try to work on it by adding in the details of unwashed and tendons, i think part of you knows it too. (does that make any sense?)