|Reviews for Make Love to me Jenna|
| mockerytheif chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
that's deep...that's all i got
| Pretty Pumpkin chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
oh, it's beautiful, it left me breathless, and a little sad...it's wonderful. :D
| LaMSaErArNier chapter 1 . 6/14/2004
oh, wow...this is amazing, so intimate...and beautifully descriptive, i love it.
| Seint chapter 1 . 1/12/2004
Wow! I can't believe I didn't find this one the first time I read through your stuff. I am SO totally adding this to my favorites list. Damn Jenna, the way you describe it, love, passion, lust (I mean that in a good way) it was no understatment when I said your writing is special. You are a special person and Kerri is blessed to have you just as you are blessed to have her.
| LiquidGenesis chapter 1 . 10/1/2003
*fans self* Wow girlie, all I can say is just wow!
| Samii Tiger chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Wow... Simply amazing... Oy, and I thought **I** was good at writing sensually like that... I could see and sense everything that you described... No wonder your girlfriend loves you so much. .~
| hrs chapter 1 . 9/14/2003
| tiger lily8 chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
Woah! This is some pretty ot stuff. Wow...you could rival Aphroditeperhaps. Very descriptive. Hope you had fun.
| Winged One1 chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
I like this poem, very very imagery-ful. Um. In a good way.
The title kinda seriously caught my attention-I was thinking, "Wants attention for this poem, neh?"
Anyway, I like the poem.
p.s. Thanks for the lovely Reviews!
| IHJ chapter 1 . 8/21/2003
One piece of advice: P'raps you should up the rating to PG-13. Foreplay, described as explicitly as this, be it man-man, woman-woman, man-woman, usually is a "touchy" subject. *sneer* I don't think so, but there are major thin-skins around me.
Nice descriptions. Mis-spelled work in "carress" and I'm not so sure I like the term "lathering". Seems to remind me of washing dishes and dogs (in cartoons) for some reason. Interesting how there's no punctuation.
Very vivid poem.
Thanks for reviewing my sister's poem.
| Ghosti chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
Wow.. very intense.. and your comparisson from your lover to a swan's neck was something I've never seem.. Impressive.
| Aries Jordan chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
*picks self up off the floor* Wow. How could you not want to write your life story if there is action like this in it.
| Yaquel Visain chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Yum. Yes, quite nice.
| Nebulous Fate chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Wow, I've never read a poem describing things like this. Very well in details, words and flow. I like this poem. First one of this kind I've read. Wonderful work! Keep it up!
| mzNEEDA chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
hey this is a beautiful poem ! keep up the writing . i just have one question .. can you just e-mail me at and ill ask . thanks bye . review some of my stuff too plz ! . thanks