Reviews for Better to Fall
Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon chapter 1 . 3/2/2005
yes! this is great! I love it!

*the Solid Gold Buddhist Raccoon
swirlygirl chapter 1 . 10/19/2003
i really love this poem its going on my favs list great work!
AVIGON chapter 1 . 9/18/2003
"[...] and being alone is the best way to be, cause when you're by yourself nobody else can say goodbye"

Very true, but is a life lived alone, really a life? I still haven't figured that one out. Can you be happy on your own? Can you stand, or even stumble, if there's no one there but you?
handle187 chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
Of course, when you fall, you need someone to pick you up again, if you're a giant tourtoise anyway I guess.
midnight dreams chapter 1 . 9/10/2003
A very good concept.

And i liked the way the word "fall" fell from the sentence.

I thought that that was very clever.

Leave me a review sometime?
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
True. Awesome work and it was cool how you presented two possible sides.

Heart of the Sword
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
*claps* just bitter enough for my taste :D though people tend to give you those funny looks when you explain that idea to them!
tweetspie chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
o_o wow... that's a really good poem!