Reviews for A Better World
DXM Junkie chapter 1 . 12/24/2003
You are a really amazing poet! It seems that you have been through a lot though..i can understand that feeling.
Juliet Squared chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
I think everyone wishes that the world were a better, more peaceful place. You're really good at letting out your thoughts and putting them in a rhyme.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Great poem you've got here. You've made some very prominent points about the world. I understand completely, and it's a shame some things about the world we cannot change. Good writing here.