Reviews for Beyond The Eye |
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Vorserkeien chapter 4 . 11/30/2003 Weird, but i mean that in a nice way! :-D Next chapter please i wanna know whats going on also! |
whisperedkiss chapter 4 . 11/30/2003 quit leaving me in suspense! I wanna know what's wrong! UR MEAN! |
EnravishedRabbit chapter 1 . 8/24/2003 Wow, that's definitely an interesting story. Good ending...I never saw it coming! The only thing I could say to critique it would be to check your grammar...there's a few grammar mistakes in it. Besides that, it was great! |
firemounrain chapter 3 . 8/21/2003 Fascinating beyond reason. -mi ps thanks for the reviews... I have a new one up too, a short story, and you know how few people review those. |
firemounrain chapter 2 . 8/21/2003 Well, you could always _explain_ it... ;) |
firemounrain chapter 1 . 8/21/2003 She's been randomly picked for insanity. I _like_ this plot! |
pippi18848 chapter 3 . 8/21/2003 I loved it! It is a really neat story:) I wish I had those kind of glasses. Well anyways see you on neopets. My username is triumphtlyhappy. |
JainaTina chapter 2 . 8/13/2003 wow! interesting...what on earth is happening when she puts the glasses on? I'm feeling very confused, but that was really neat! lol I've lost my mind...where could it have gone this time...hm... Keep up the good work! |
JainaTina chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 wow..weirdly cool! neat-o! add a new chappy soon! |
dreamdiver chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 That was really really good |
M.D. Cantine chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 At first I thought this story would be really cliche and dry, but it's funny and refreshing. |
ionlyliveindreams chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 Woah! Creepy! I like it! Great start! A bit fast in some places, but I shouldn't complain. People tell me that too. Anyways, I like it, and you have to continue! Keep writing ~ionlyliveindreams |
whisperedkiss chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 a little bit confusing... i don't get exactly what was going on...but it still is a reaaly cool story! I love it. |
Approaching Autumn chapter 1 . 8/12/2003 oh! i love it! |