|Reviews for Standing Tough|
| Shadafakup chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
That was painfully beautiful..
I chose to read the poem because of the subject it covered and I was not disappointed..
I liked how you fully covered your point and made the piece so real, and so moving..
The rhyming is quite natural and the structure easy to follow..
Nice piece, emotive and very well described..
This could almost be a song.. Is it? MMh, had this nice sound and 'ring' to it.. I enjoyed it muchly..
Keep it up..
| Dashy chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
this is good, i like these two lines: "Perhaps she'll find a better day, Without the hefty price to pay..."