Hello...uh...*sweatdrop* Okay...I loved all 5 chapters and read all 5 chapters and the Authors Note! :( Sad you haven't updated...oh well...Love the story! Keep up the good work...hope you update again sometime. Later!-Lady Akina

AN UPDATE! *cries thanks to happiness* TT so happy... *whacks Toya* bad boy.
Inu: windy sure is windy!
Maru: Oo *tosses Inu away* how did he get here?
rav: ... no clue... well i can imagine what will happen to Akira now... *sigh* tragedy, tragedy, and tragedy. just after reading what Damon said and all. *sigh... again* i need to stop that! well loved it Kitty! GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!
Ravage Blue

Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while. .
I've been busy with school, family, and this basically eternal hell called life. As far as the chappies go, they are getting really good. You've got to update as soon as possible. If you need help just email me at or use AOL IM to talk to me. My AOL screen name is Giscleo. And I was going to ask you, you read Yasha Hybrid? I love that story, it is so awesome! Can you please e-mail the pic you drew of Maru cause I think he's so cool. I drew my own version of Maru (I promised Ravage I would but I don't have a scanner), so I would really like to see how you drew him. If you get in touch with Ravage, please tell her that I drew Maru for her. Her and I review each others storys and have found that we have a lot in common (Inuyashsa is awesome!). So, anyway, sorry if I wrote so much (I'm on a sugar high), & update soon please. Remember, if you need any help, just e-mail me or IM me. Well, bye now. _

AIYEE! I LOVE THE PIC! as i said earlier... eheheheh... well anyway, what i didn't tell you was that, that pic is now my display picture adn i printed it. - i plan on shwoing off your beautiflu art work. -
Maru: YOU POSTED MY PIC AS YOUR DISPLAY PIC?
Ravage: YUP! - Well, update soon please, adn i hope things get less hectic at your home.
Ravage Blue ((VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY VERY PROUD to ahve Kittybell as a friend))

o_O Another cliffhanger.. and WHAT? There's not another chapter? I suggest you get your ass hopping to it! Write the next one!
I love everything about this story so far, and I'm anxious to see what you have planned... damn it write more!
LateraMaiAngel

o_O Cliffhanger! Very good once again.. and still, "damn!"
LateraMaiAngel

Man! I can so kick Bit's ass right now for treating Akira the way he did. Let him have a piece of me and I'll show him to treat girls like that...
LateraMaiAngel

Once again, another "Damn!" I love your writing.. it's simply beautiful. Now.. I wanna read more..
LateraMaiAngel

lol
yeah toya, you did say it louder. lol anway! you're so welcome, Kitty! *hugs back* i ahve alot to thank you for! you've reviewed all my stories, got me into RPing, and you kinda help me going on. great friedn. WITH a great chapter might i add. too much bad guys, too little akira and damon though. oh well GREAT CHAPTER NONE THE LESS! NEXT ONE SOON PLEASE!

KITTY! (tackles) You actually updated! i'm so happy! adn you say you'l update faster? i'd apreciate it if you did!

well GREAT CHAPTER! NEXT ONE PLEASE!

Ravage Blue

Hey Kitty!

Man-o-man this is a good fic! Though when her Mommy died, I was a little sad.. *Sniff.* Nonetheless! Beautifully written! If I were in that story, I would beat Bit over the head with a baseball bat over and over and over until his head fell off..

Anyway..

_ I love Akira’s personality! She’s so spunky and rude, it’s awesome! I also like how she started off as an outcast. Usually most fics start out with some popular girl or something, so that was a great twist. Man that Bit pisses me off.. *Sweat drop.* And that Jiro guy, he better not get any ideas! I can’t wait for the next chapter! Tell me A.S.A.P okie dokie? Ciao!

Love yaz!

-Dincht Girl

hiya kitty! i'm kinda grounded, but i snuck on to read this adn review. this will probabaly be my last review fgor a long time. five weeks to be exact. well gotta go. adn yeah, you should put in toya.

maru: now if only Inu could appear, then it would be comic relief.

Ravage: right. well great cahpter... NEXT ONE PLEASE!

ravage Blue

k, first things first - awesome story, awesome idea, awesome plot!

You know how to tell a story and it makes it VERY easy to get lost reading and not want to stop - i definitely want to see more - BUT the only thing i can remotely see wrong is the way your quotes are set up - they HAVE to be indented as a new paragraph everytime someone talks or it just loses the reader.

Otherwise, my only complaint is that i want more! :)

KITTY! YOU NEED TO UPDATE! (calms down) it's been so long since you've updated anything. i'm getting worried. I know i should talk because of my stories, but i've at elast been updating Yasha Hybrid... Kinda sorta. well i just hope you update soon. see you in teh reviews! ja ne!

Ravage Blue

This is really good so far. You've got to update as soon as possible.