I think the first chapter was definately better...but I guess all will be explained later!

Still interesting...looking forward to chapter 3

Spawny

Like it...a lot. You definately have talent and i'm looking forward to reading more of your work sometime soon. If you have a chance, feel free to R&R some of my writing! Spawny

Hey what's up? SFTF here you juet reviewed like ... almost all of my stories, thank you very much! You describe people very well, (but for some constructive critisisim, you're dialouge is a little choppy and you have a few grammer mistakes, but) good writing and a very good plot line. You just need a beta reader (like me) to look over and correct stupid little mistakes which I would be honored to do, you can just send your chapters to me in and e-mail and I'll proof them, if you want. Also on the note of writing a fanfic for Always a reason, just because Joey died doesn't mean youcan't write a scene about them, between the beggining and when he died or even before the story when they were actually together. And I know what a Necropheliac is and I love puddle of mudd so you don't have to tell me what control is about (you have great taste in music) a quote from you "i admire your work greatly" thank you very much I admire my work too. I love to write. And I hope you keep up writing, it's good for your brain's creative side to get all that imaginative stuff out. Good luck to you and eep in touch ()

This seems Really Funny. Continue!

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