Reviews for Web of Lies
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 3/2/2009
This poem is really creative. I really enjoyed reading it.
lovely-death chapter 1 . 8/19/2003
This is so powerful. It gives off a great message. If only my brother could read it. ::Sighs::


Heel Goed!~
SweetGrape chapter 1 . 8/14/2003
Basically expanding on the common phrase.

Murky sort of description, but ti works becasue it gives an overtone of darkness and things being unclear which is what you get with lies.

'the web of lies he has left behind'- good point.

The end is almost a threat or warning, that he will suffer the same fate as he gave out- karma-like.
Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
Ha, this is great! I love the line "The spider is busy..."

And the last 3 lines are great, kinda getting your revenge. After the spider ruins so many lives, he gets caught in his own web. I like that idea.
ApolloGod chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
I really like it. Especially the ending, though I agree with the first comment. It is quite good though.
AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Wouldn't it be many other bugs' lives?

Good poem, I like the whole thing, especially how you end it.
Virtuoso06 chapter 1 . 8/12/2003
Eventually the spider will leave

But the web of lies he has left behind

Will have ruined many other bug's lives

And if the spider is not careful

That part of your poem hit me the most. I dont knwo why. Your writing is amazing! i loved it! Great Job!

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